Please, correct me :)

Hello. My name is Mirela. I live in Sarajevo. I'm 23 years old. I have a brother and sister. My brother is married, and he lives in Bosnia, but my sister lives in USA, Idaho, Twin Falls. My brother has two children, a boy and a girl, and my sister has two boys. My sister has been in Bosnia since 2005. I didn't see my sister 10 years ago ( I haven't seen my sister in 10 years ) We talk on facebook and viber only. I love my sister so much, and I hope that I will see her and her family next year.

Thank you :)

(Here's your entry written more naturally, for reference ^-^)

Hello, my name is Mirela. I live in Sarajevo and am 23 years old. I have a brother and sister. My brother is married and lives in Bosnia, but my sister lives in Twin Falls, Idaho. My brother has two children, a boy and a girl, and my sister has two boys. My sister has been in Bosnia since 2005, so I haven't seen her in ten years. We only talk on Facebook and Viber. I love my sister so much, and I hope that I will get to see her and her family next year.

Thank you :)

Please correct my English :)

Hi, My name is Mirela.

I live in Sarajevo. I'm 23 years old, and have a brother and sister. My brother married, living in Bosnia, but my sister lives in the USA; in Twin Falls, Idaho. My brother has two children: a boy and a girl, but my sister has two boys. My sister moved to Bosnia in 2005. I haven't seen my sister for 10 years. We talk only on Facebook and viber. I love my sister so much; and hope that I will see her and her family next year!

Thank you :)

Not sure what "viber" is but apart from that it's fine, Harry :)