what happen with the new world??

i think that aroud the world,people say: why dont i have a good shoes? what brand of clothes does hi or she wear ?
in africa a lot of people dont have anything, and they dont complain because anybody listen them, then tell me where are the churches? whatever church has some money, one day ago i read that all the churches will be able to remove the poverty,misery, hunger pfff come on¡¡ we know the true ¡¡
i am not a excellent boy but i am trying that with text change the mind or do it for an excellent world.
i respect your belief but i dont see the change they need us.

Please note that words like Africa must start with a capital A as they are proper nouns. 'I' should also always be capitalised.

What happened with the new world?

I think that around the world, people say: "Why don't I have a good shoes? What brand of clothes does he or she wear?"
In Africa, a lot of people don't have anything, and they don't complain because anybody nobody listens to them. Tell me, where are the churches? whatever church has some money, All churches have money.  One day ago Yesterday, I read that all the churches will could be able to remove the poverty, misery and hunger. pfff come on¡¡ we know the true ¡¡ Pff, come on! We know the truth!

I am not an excellent boy, but I am trying that with text change the mind or do it for an excellent world to change the mind of others through words so we can have a better world. 
I respect your belief but I don't see the change they need us that we need.

Notes:

• Always capitalise the first letter of a sentence

• Always capitalise 'I' when you're talking about yourself, and proper names (like Africa)

• "Don't" is actually two words glued together, "do" and "not." That's why it has an apostrophe; it's like the glue. Don't forget it ;)

• I agree with you. 

what has happened with the new world??

I think that around the world people say: Why don't i have a good shoes? what brand of clothes does hi he or she wear ?
In africa a lot of people dont have nothing anything, and they dont complain because nobody anybody listens to them. Now then tell me where are what is the church doing? whatever Every church has some money, one day ago Yesterday i I read that all the churches will be able to could remove the poverty,misery, hunger pfff come on¡¡ we all know the true truth¡¡
i am not a excellent boy but i am trying to change the minds of the people in order to make the world a better place that with text change the mind or do it for an excellent world.
I respect your beliefs but I dont see the change that is needed in this world

Hey Jorge,

Hope this helps. Remember, 

“Be the change that you wish to see in the world.” - Mahatma Gandhi

Matt