A Beautiful Girl in a Book Store

On the way while I go home from the course, I through the bookstore and I remembered to the a book I must have. Therefore, So, I turned left my bicycle left towards the park. When, I entered to the store, a young girl, who was  looking for something on the floor, bumped into walk and crush me. "Oh, I'm sorry", she said to me. I wanted to say "You're so beautiful" while she was apologising said sorry, but that was impossible and I just say said "No problem miss". My I regret, I should have asked for her number at least.    ..hahaha...

Thank you for correcting me. :)

A Beautiful Girl in Book Store

On the way home from my course, I went through the bookstore and I remembered the book i needed to get. Therefore, I turned to the left on my bike to go to the park. When, I entered the store, a young girl, who was looking for something on the floor, walked and bumped into me. "Oh, I'm Sorry", she said to me. I wanted to say "you're so beautiful" while she said sorry, but thats impossible and I just said "no problem miss..". My regret was, was not even asking for her number..hahaha...

Thank you for correcting me. :)

Remember to use the past tense!!

I say to her: I said to her

I ask: I asked

Hope it helps:) go find that girl!