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Expo Milano Yesterday I was in Milan to see Expo. I was waiting this cultural event by time, my mother gave me tickets in April for my birthday. Sincerely, I was left a little disappointed. All pavilions are spectacular on the outside, but very few have a soul inside, something interesting to say, to teach. I have visited 14 pavilions (and just in one day, in this sense I was lucky). The pavilions that I liked the most were the United Arab Emirates, Thailand and Austria. The pavilions where you eat better, however, are Italy, Austria (I tasted one delicious strudel) and France. However, what has disappointed my expectation is that Expo does not transmit what should be the main theme: Food, energy of the world. Participate in this cultural event would have meant coming home more aware of the problem of world hunger, the activities of sustainable agriculture that the different states participating in Expo have plans to put into practice, and the humanitarian assistance necessary to feed the world in 2050. So for those who can not go to Milan, take heart because you missed who knows what. Expo is nice, but not a must. I hope that in 2020, when it's up to the United Arab Emirates, will do better.

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Expo Milano

Yesterday I was in Milan to see Expo. I have was waited a long time ing for  this cultural event. by time, my mother gave me tickets in April for my birthday. Sincerely (Ok, ma è meglio dire: "truly") , I was (se già hai detto "left" quindi non hai bisogno di "was"perchè non puoi parlare nella lingua inglese come parlerài nella lingua italiana. Questo è un errore tipico anche per la gente serba. C'è altro tempo dove si trova questo "was + ING alle fine del verbo, ma questo non è il caso qui)  left a little disappointed. All pavilions are spectacular on the outside, but very few have a soul inside, something interesting to say, to teach. I have visited 14 pavilions (and just in one day, in this sense I was lucky). The pavilions that I liked the most were the United Arab Emirates, Thailand and Austria. The pavilions where the food was the best were (Non traducsci literalmente come parlerài nella tua madrelingua. La cosa più importante nella lingua inglese è scrivere le sentenze breve e semplice perhè l'ingelse non è come la lingua italiana oppure lingua spagnola dove si è possibile essprimerti con le sentenze lunghe. Se provi di scrivere le sentenze cosi lunghe, quindi troverài moltissimi errori nella tua ortografia e forse con la grammatica anche.). you eat better, h However, are Italy, Austria (I tasted one delicious strudel) and France. However, what has disappointed me y expectation is that Expo does not transmit what should be it's the main theme: Food and , energy of the world. Participate in this cultural event could would have meant coming home more aware of the problem of world hunger, the activities of sustainable agriculture that the different states participating in Expo have planned s to put into practice, and the humanitarian assistance is necessary to feed the world in 2050. So for those who can not go to Milan, take heart because you didn't miss ed who knows what.anything important. Expo is nice, but not a must. I hope that in 2020, when it's in up to the United Arab Emirates, they will do it better.

 

Va bene, hai solitanto un'paio dei errori. 

Se hai bigosno d'aiuto, puoi contare con me senza problemi. 

Un abbracio forte per te. 

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Milan Expo 2015

Yesterday I visited Milan Expo. I had plans to visit this Expo and was waiting for it to start. My mother knew of my interest in this Expo so she bought me a ticket for it. She gave it to me as my birthday present. That was back in April. With all the pent up excitement and anticipation I had for this Expo I honestly have to say it did not measure up to my expectations and I was left a little disappointed.

All the different countries' booths were spectacular on the outside, but very few had a soul inside. It seemed like they had nothing interesting to say or teach. I visited 14 booths altogether in a single day. That is a lot of booths to visit in a day. I felt lucky being able to visit that many.

The booths I liked the most were the United Arab Emirates, Thailand and Austria. The booths with the best food to eat were Italy, Austria (where I tasted one delicious strudel) and France. However, what was disappointing about the Expo was, it did not transmit what should have been its main theme: Future Food and Energy Needs of the World. In my opinion this Expo should have strove to make its visitors aware of world hunger and show how different nation's sustainable agriculture plans can make a difference by 2050.

So for those of you who can not go to Milan for this Expo take heart because I think you did not missed much. This Expo is nice, but not a must see. I hope that in 2020 when the Expo is held in United Arab Emirates they will do a better job.

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Expo Milano

Yesterday I was in Milan to see Expo. I have waited a long time for this cultural event.My mother gave me tickets in April for my birthday. Truly, I left a little disappointed. All  the pavilions are spectacular on the outside, but very few have a soul inside,  that is something interesting to say,or to teach. I visited 14 pavilions ( in just one day, I was lucky). The pavilions that I liked the most were the United Arab Emirates, Thailand and Austria. The pavilions where the food was the best were Italy, Austria (I tasted one delicious strudel) and France. However, what disappointed me is that Expo does not transmit what should be it's main theme: Food and energy of the world. Participants in this cultural event could have come home more aware of the problem of world hunger, the activities of sustainable agriculture,what the different countries participating in Expo have planned to put into practice, and what humanitarian assistance is necessary to feed the world in 2050. So for those who can not go to Milan, take heart because you didn't miss anything important. Expo is nice, but not a must. I hope that in 2020, when it's in the United Arab Emirates,  they will do better.

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