vacation story
i went to the youngin
that is so fantastic place
i went to the everland and ride a rollercoaster and zoo world
and i sleep at the fension
i cook a BBQ with my firend
but outside of house there is so many mosequido
finally we fail anout BBQ
next day i ride a perrorglading
that is aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamazing fantastic experience
during fly the sky i think that i wish a bird
that is my vacation story
is it fantastic?
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Vacation story
I went to the Youngin for my vacation. It is such a fantastic place. I went to the Everland and rode a rollercoaster, visited zoo world and i slept at the fension
I cooked a BBQ with my friend, but outside of house there were so many mosquitos that we finally gave up the BBQ.
finally we fail anout BBQ
The next day I went paragliding. That is an aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamazing fantastic experience! Flying the sky. I think that I wished to be a bird.
That is my vacation story.
Isn't it fantastic?
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[Good job, basically. You were certainly enthusiastic and made it sound exciting. Remember your capitalization and punctuation.]
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