something about friends

when i am was in senior high school,it is a great i have good memory! I have made many great friends in senior high school.we are were happy together.But in university, i find some people are not pure,it's diffcult difficult to make friends in university.someone is some people are selfish.Even then,I still like make friends,and like chatting with friends,I very sincerely hope that i can make friends in italki.Dear friends,I am waiting for u.I want to say a sentence to my friends-----"To be frank honest with you,I like you, and should bei'm  glad to give you any help I can could".

you are so lovely.....you are good in english ..you not make many mistakes...i write you also the better way to write but it's not wrong what you had write...when i read this notebook seems i write that...when i start uni last year i discover another world that to tell the truth i not like so much...in high school people seemed more sincere and free of secondary interest..
it's for this reason that often i feel me alone..i'm happy to be your friend and that we can help each other...now i'm working hard to learn well chinese...i have many things to learn...i hope to come soon in china and i hope to have soon a scholarship for coming there.....keep always in touch

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Something about friends

I have great memories of when I am was in senior high school! I have made many great friends in senior high school.  We are were happy together. <space> But in university, I find some people are not pure. <full stop> <space> It's difficult to make friends in university.  <space> Someone is are selfish. <Space> Even then, <space>I still like to make friends, and like chatting with friends. <full stop, space> I very sincerely hope that I can make friends in italki.  <space> Dear friends, <space> I am waiting for you. <space>I want to say a sentence to my friends-----"To be frank with you, <space>I like you and should be glad give you any help I can".


I have made is ok, but sort of a strange tense/aspect to use here. It is complete. so "I made" is simpler.
We are happy, present? could be, but maybe you mean past, were.
Saying people are not "pure" is strange to me.
Not usually comma before "and".
I like litem1,  item2, item3 and item4.
As above, you could change "I should be" into "I'm glad to", but maybe you do mean "should be". "should be" has a sense of obligation.
"honest" sort of goes better than "frank" but only a little better. Frank is fine.
"Frank" sounds a little like telling them off. "Honest" has more a feel of telling them something about you.

A great piece, interesting, warm & well written. I have corrected only very small things.