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Today~ Today,a friend and I,we decided cancel the plan of going to Singapore for traveling :( And I took subway in half a hour to a place where I pay my Internet fee. Then I ate noodles for dinner at a retaurant.The waiter of this restaurant is pretty enthusiasm :D And today my city had heavy rain three times,but they kept only about a few minutes.So the air is fresh and feel cool~

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Today~

Today, a friend and I,we decided to cancel the plan of going to Singapore for travel :(
Also, I took subway for half an hour to a place where I pay my Internet fee.
Then I ate noodles for dinner at a retaurant. The waiter of this restaurant is pretty enthusiastic :D
Also, today my city had heavy rain three times, but they lasted only about a few minutes, so the air is fresh and feel cool~

 

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