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Hello everyone I'm Stephany and I´m learning English because for me, its really important to me.  know that and I want to lern soo good learn to speak English well and I want to know more people. and I want to speak with my family to in LA; they only speak English. and I need that, I hope that you can help me for these with this and I hope to you can teach me English. and Thank you for all everything. and i think so i tell you a lot for me and i hope that you can help me to that. I think I have told you a lot about me so you can help me with that.  bye

theseThis is me.

Hello everyone. I'm Stephany and i´m(or I am) learning english because for me, its really important. know that and I want to learn soo good english and i want to know more people and i want to speak with my family to(In) LA, they only speak english and I need(or want) that, I hope that you can help me for these(Instead of these use "this" for example: I want this apple, just one or I want these apples, more than one) and I hope to you can teach me english. and Thank you for all(everything) and i think so i tell you a lot for me and i hope that you can help me to that.  bye.

At the end, I think you meant to say that you want to talk more about yourself?

Anyways, your english is so much better than my spanish! Great job and continue to practice.

Have you ever been to LA? It is a great city with lots to do!