Learning a language!!

I love travelling!! I think this is a great way to know people, make friends, learn about other cultures, and, finally, explore our world!!
That is just the very reason that I am here, on Italki. Next year I mightay go to work at Disney World for 6 mounths, and of course, I am so excited about that!! It will be my first time living on my own, and so I will have to learn how to do that!!; and also, at the same time, I will be able to get to know a great country like the USA for the first time!! 
I would love to be able to go and to have a wonderful experience!!

¡Buen trabajo! Como en español, inglés usa "!" para el punto de exclamacion pero no la una que es del revés ("¡") porque parece como un "i". Su inglés es fantástico, y yo solamente necesitaba corriger las frases que no fluyó bien, pero ¡buen trabajo y siga practicando!

Learning a language!

I love travelling!! I think this is a great way to get to know people, make friends, learn about other cultures, and, finally, explore our world¡¡
That is just the reason why i am here, in Italki. Next year I may go to work in Disney World for 6 months, and of course, I am so exciting about that!! I could live away from my house for the first time, learn to live on my own; and also, at the same time, I could visit a great country like USA for the first time too.
I would love to go and to have that wonderful experience¡¡

Learning a lenguage¡¡

I love travelling¡¡ i think this is a great way to know('get to know' or 'to meet' people), make friends, learn about other cultures, and, finally, explore our world¡¡
That is just the reason which(why) i am here, in Italki. Next year I may go to work in Disney World for 6 mounths(months), and of course, i am so exciting(excited) about that¡¡ I could live out of my house(away from home) for the first time, learn to live by my way; and also, at the same time, I could know a great country like USA for the first time too.
I would love can go and to have(I would love to go and have) that wonderful experience¡¡

Learning a Language¡¡

I love travelling.  ¡¡ I think this is a great way to get to know people, make friends, learn about other cultures, and, finally, explore our world.  ¡¡
That is just the reason why which I am here, on Italki. Next year I may go to work at in Disney World for 6 mounths, and of course, I am so excited exciting about it. that¡¡ I would live away from home out of my house for the first time, learn to live on my own by my way; and also, at the same time, I could get to know a great country like the USA for the first time too.
I would love to be able to can go and to have that wonderful experience!  ¡¡