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Short Story At nightfall, when uncle Joe´s ghost woke up, something seemed very peculiar: The study, where he used to sleep, was completly empty. - Oh, they moved again! - say the ghost, after go over the house and find out that all rooms were empty - Why they have gone now? - he asked himself, flying out of the house and starting to look for the new location of his favourite niece. Meanwhile, in a small house in Massachusetts, the ghost´s niece lied down with his wife and said her: - I like this new house very much, I wish it is not haunted, I´m already tired for moving. - Me too - said his wife, hugging him tightly.

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Short Story

   At nightfall when uncle Joe´s ghost woke up, something seemed very peculiar: The study where he used to sleep was completly empty.

   "Oh, they moved again!" said the ghost after going over to the house and finding out that all of the rooms were empty. Where has everyone gone?, he asked himself whilst flying out of the house, looking for where his favourite niece might be. and starting to look for the new location of his favourite niece.

   Meanwhile, in a small house in Massachusetts, his niece was led down with his wife and said her: 
   "I like this new house very much, I wish it wasn't haunted... I´m already tired of moving.", she said, quietly.
   "Me too." The wife replied, hugging her tightly.

 

I hope that this is helpful. It is a very nice short story. It is hard to discern who is talking at times so I hope that I have labelled them correctly! I think for easier comprehension (for the reader), it needs to be made clear who is speaking. Is this part of a larger story? :)

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