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My beloved high school I'm senior at a high school which is one of the most famous school in HN, its name is Yen Hoa. Up to now, I have still been so proud to be a student of my school. Yen Hoa means Peace. My school locates on Nguyen Khang stress. As its name, my school is peaceful and very beautiful with the style in which the buildings were made is ancient architecture. Yen Hoa is established 54 years ago and also one of the most old school in the city. There were a lot of trees grown in my school. Behind the main building which is full of classes was a forest with many old tree, and there were a lot of kinds of bird inhabited or came to build nests too. But at present, the forest was destroyed because they intended to build a new building on the land that used to be a forest. We, students, objected to the proposal and tried to save the forest, but finally we were failure. We were all upset about that. Although there are only half of trees initially in my school, but my school is still beautiful in its own way, the way that is only one and unique. I love the peacefulness of my school, love every single class, love every single tree whose shade me and my friends often sat under, love the clean pretty large campus. And of course, I love people here either, yet much more the school's sight. I love my friendly and affectionate friends, love my teachers who usually consider their students as their children (Frankly, I don't like some of them). Yen Hoa is like my second family, teachers are like parent and classmates are like brothers and sisters. Yen Hoa brought me the most amazing friend in the word - my bestie - G. At Yen Hoa, I found a boy who used to be my first love. Even though my school has lots of odd discipline we must obey even when we really don't want to, but it's absolutely nothing. I can't tell you how much I fall in love with my school, how much benefits I have gained from it as well. Just a sentence, I love it. I just have only one year to be a high school student at my wonderful high school, I definitely will take advantage of it to create the most beautiful memories.

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My beloved high school

I'm a senior at a high school which is one of the most famous schools in HN, its name is Yen Hoa. Up until now, I have still been so proud to be a student of my school.
Yen Hoa means Peace. My school is located on Nguyen Khang street(?). As with its name, my school is peaceful and very beautiful as the style with which the buildings were made is ancient architecture. Yen Hoa was established 54 years ago and also one of the oldest schools in the city. There were a lot of trees growing near the school campus. Behind the main building, which is full of classes, was a forest with many old trees, and there were lots of different kinds of bird living in or coming to build nests in this forest. But at present, the forest was destroyed because they intended to build a new building on the land that used to be a forest. We, students, objected to the proposal and tried to save the forest, but unfortunately we failed. We were all upset about that.
Although there are only half of the trees initially in my school, but my school is still beautiful in its own way, the way that is only one and unique.
I love the peacefulness of my school, I love every single class, I love every single tree whose shade my friends and I often sat under, and I love the clean, pretty, and large campus. And of course, I love the people here too, yet there is much more than the school's sight. I love my friendly and affectionate friends, I love my teachers who usually consider their students as their children (Frankly, I don't like some of them).
Yen Hoa is like my second family, teachers are like parents and classmates are like brothers and sisters. Yen Hoa brought me the most amazing friend in the word - my bestie - G. At Yen Hoa, I found a boy who was my first love.
Even though my school has lots of odd disciplinary actions, as we must obey even when we really do not want to, but it's absolutely nothing in comparison to the pros of attending that school.
I can't tell you how much I have fallen in love with my school, nor how many benefits I have gained from it, but I think it can be explained partiall in just one sentence: I love it.
I just have only one year left to be a high school student at my wonderful high school, and I definitely will take advantage of it to create the most beautiful memories.

 

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