The plans for my long vacation

Half of my long vacation has already passed. 
(나의 긴 휴가중 절반이 지나가고 있다)
I'm taking a break from working for 1 year as I injured my wrist last winter. 
(지난 겨울에 손목을 다쳐서 1년간 일을 쉬고 있다)
At that time, I was in severe pain because of my wrist, (on the other hand - this phrase would usually work, however it is confusing when you are talking about your hands) however, on a positive note, I can put my work down have some free time for myself.
(그때는 손목의 심한 통증때문에 고통스러웠지만, 한편으로는 일을 내려놓고, 휴가를 가질수 있어서 좋은면이 있다)
I have been busy my whole life.
(난 평생 바쁘게 살아왔다.)
I was always too busy with the "I should dos", and never had time for the "I'd like to dos" 
(하고싶은 일보다 해야하는 일이 더 많았다)
This year, I want to travel often. I want to spend my time reading various books and making good friends all across the world.
(올해, 나는 여행을 자주 가고 싶고, 다양한 책을 읽고, 세계방방곡곡에 좋은 친구들을 사귀고싶다)
So, I have a trip planed to Europe in October.
(그래서 나는 10월쯤에 유럽여행계획을 가지고 있다)
I'm afraid of the strange experience, but on the other hand (this is a good place to use this phrase), I'm very excited.
(낮선경험에 대해 두렵기도 하지만 한편으로는 많이 설렌다)
I want to spend my free time resting in quiet places rather than touring around the busier sights.
(관광지를 가는것보다 조용한 곳에서 휴식을 하며 보내길 원한다)
I don't want to be afraid. I just want to enjoy it. I really want to be happy.
(두려워하지 않고, 그저 즐겼으면 좋겠다. 정말 행복했으면, 좋겠다)


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I just like and practice english.
please adjust... and give some comment about anything...

thank you....

The plan of my long vacation

Almost, My long vacation is passing about half time.

I'm taking a break from working for 1 year as I was injured on my wrist at last winter,

At that time, I was badly in pain because severe pain of my wrist. On the other hand, I have positive point I can put my work down and I can get free time for my self.

I have been busy my whole life.

There were more working 'I should do' than the working ' I'd like to do '

At This year, I want to go to travel more often and I'd like spend my time on reading various books and I want to make good friend from all across the nations.

So, I have a trip plan of Europe about October.

I'm afraid of different experance. On the other hand, I'm very excited.

I want to spend my free time for taking a resting at quiet place than going around famouse place.

I don't want to be afraid and I just want to enjoy it, I really want to be happy.



I'm not good at english.
I just like and practice english.
please adjust... and give some comment about anything...

thank you....

Good job, Ji young. Keep practicing!

--Ravi.