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Sunset Yesterday, I was on the fret. I didn't sleep all the night, so that I slept all the day. When I really woke up, it was almost five o'clock in the afternoon. I thought I should move my body. "Why not go to see the sunset?" This idea came from my heart. Hence, I rode my bicycle and moved forward to the sun. My destination is a small fishing harbor named Lishui in Longjing. It's located nearby Taiwan Power Company and not far (about 10 km) from my house. But I spent almost 1 hour to get to. There is a bike path on top of the levee. When I arrived, It's almost sunset. I stood on top of the levee and felt vernal breeze touching my cheeks. A few boats were lain there. The color of twilight was very beautiful. At that moment, I was released by myself. After sunset, I went home and my mood gradually lightened.

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Sunset

 

Yesterday, I was on the fret. I didn't sleep the whole night, so I slept the whole day. When I finally woke up, it was almost five o'clock in the afternoon; so I thought I should move my body. An idea came from my heart, "Why not go to see the sunset?” I rode my bicycle towards the sun.

 

My destination was a small fishing harbor named Lishui in Longjing. It's located nearby to the Taiwan Power Company and not far (about 10 km) from my house. But I spent almost 1 hour getting there. There is a bike path on top of the levee. When I arrived, it was almost time for sunset. I stood on top of the levee and felt a vernal breeze touching my cheeks. A few boats were docked there. The twilight color was very beautiful. At that moment, I felt released.

 

After sunset, I went home and my mood gradually lightened.

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