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①We are in a good location that is a 5 minute walk from the "ODORI STATION" . All rooms are installed with high speed internet free of charge! For your business and sightseeing .
②We are in a good location 5 minute walk from the "ODORI STATION" . All rooms are installed with high speed internet(free charge! For your business and sightseeing . Enjoy your stay with us !
③There are 19 room that can make TRIPLE BED ROOM . But one of the bed will be extra bed .
④When you use internet in your guest room , we will lent you modem set ,and will fix it up the house phone line to the high speed internet line. (free of charge)
And you can also use Wifi at the 2nd floor lobby.
At the 2nd floor lobby , you can catch the signal the name of "FREE SPOT".
Let you know how to conect internet thrugh "FREE SPOT AIR STATION"
At the first ,you have to apply with your cellphone's mail address.
You would get pass wiht your cell phone . Then put it to the blank of your laptop .
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①We are in a good location that is a 5 minute walk from the "ODORI STATION" . All rooms are installed with high speed internet free of charge! For your business and sightseeing.
~You could try saying...
1)All rooms are installed with high speed internet free of charge...
for your pleasure.
2)All rooms are installed with complementary high speed internet.
The reasons for using the internet do not need to be explained.
③There are 19 room that can make TRIPLE BED ROOM . But one of the bed will be extra bed .
There are 19 rooms that have three beds, but one of the beds in an extra.
④When you use internet in your guest room , we will lent you modem set ,and will fix it up the house phone line to the high speed internet line. (free of charge)
And you can also use Wifi at the 2nd floor lobby.
At the 2nd floor lobby , you can catch the signal the name of "FREE SPOT".
Let you know how to conect internet thrugh "FREE SPOT AIR STATION"
At the first ,you have to apply with your cellphone's mail address.
You would get pass wiht your cell phone . Then put it to the blank of your laptop .
When using the internet in your guest room we will lend you the a modem and change the line to the complementary high speed internet. There is also free wifi on the 2nd floor lobby. The name of the hot stop is "Free Spot". To acess the the hot spot type in your email adress. You will receive the password on your cell phone then, type the code into you to your computer. ( You must have a smart phone to do this)
~You could try saying...
1)All rooms are installed with high speed internet free of charge...
for your pleasure.
2)All rooms are installed with complementary high speed internet.
The reasons for using the internet do not need to be explained.
③There are 19 room that can make TRIPLE BED ROOM . But one of the bed will be extra bed .
There are 19 rooms that have three beds, but one of the beds in an extra.
④When you use internet in your guest room , we will lent you modem set ,and will fix it up the house phone line to the high speed internet line. (free of charge)
And you can also use Wifi at the 2nd floor lobby.
At the 2nd floor lobby , you can catch the signal the name of "FREE SPOT".
Let you know how to conect internet thrugh "FREE SPOT AIR STATION"
At the first ,you have to apply with your cellphone's mail address.
You would get pass wiht your cell phone . Then put it to the blank of your laptop .
When using the internet in your guest room we will lend you the a modem and change the line to the complementary high speed internet. There is also free wifi on the 2nd floor lobby. The name of the hot stop is "Free Spot". To acess the the hot spot type in your email adress. You will receive the password on your cell phone then, type the code into you to your computer. ( You must have a smart phone to do this)
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