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Schools should spend on computers and software than on textbooks. Do you agree?
Nowadays, technology has an important role in our society especially in schools where young people is influenced by modern devices every day. I would like to explain why schools should spend more on computers.
Firstly, these machines are useful because in every kind of job you will always be requested to use one. In addition, devices have more information than textbooks where people find out more about topics when connecting to the Internet.
However, in the past people used to study only on the books but time is changing thanks to technology and we always need to be updated.
Secondly, even though books bring us to focusing on pictures instead technology can pop you into any place around the world towards a screen in a few seconds. As consequence I think this is the most enjoyable way to learn and study more.
Finally, in my opinion schools should spend more money in computers according to student ages in order to prepare young people for the future quickly.
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Could anybody correct it please? Thanks!
Schools should spend MORE on computers and software than on textbooks. Do you agree?
Nowadays, technology has an important role in our society especially in schools where young people ARE is influenced by modern devices every day. I would like to explain why schools should spend more on computers.
Firstly, these machines are useful because in every kind of job you will always be requested to use one. In addition, devices have more information than textbooks where people find out more about topics when connecting to the Internet.
However, in the past people used to study only IN on the books but time is changing thanks to technology and we always need to be updated.
Secondly, even though books ALLOW US TO FOCUS ON WORDS AND PICTURES bring us to focusing on pictures instead technology can pop you into any place around the world THROUGH THE towards a screen in a few seconds. As consequence I think this is the most enjoyable way to learn and ENCOURAGE US TO study more.
Finally, in my opinion schools should spend more money in computers according to student ages in order to prepare young people for the future quickly.
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