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9 / 11 On September eleventh, 2001 New York went through a traumatic experience : A group of terrorists hijacked four planes and flew two of them into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center, so the highest buildings of Manhatten started to collapse and burn. More than hundred firefighters risked their own lives to trying put out the fire and rescue survivors who had been trapped in their office, but not everybody could be saved. Almost 3,000 people were killed on that tragic 9/11 because they were buried under the derbis or they choked in the fire as they were not be able to get out of the skyscrapers anymore. Some people decided to commit suicide by throwing themselves out of the top- floor windows to escape such a terrible death. Today Ground zero, the place where the Twin Towers once stood, is a memorial to the victims and in a way their graveyard where relatives and friends of the dead gather to mourn for them. This is why i think amerikans should not rebuild the Towers, at least not at Ground Zero. 9 / 11 has been one of the darkest days for the USA and for Western democracies in general because it made everybody realized how vulnerable they were. If the most powerful country with the best security systems ever had not been able to prevent such a babaric attack, what about the other countries? They can attack germany to. All in all, 9/11 has opened our eyes to the fact that we are not safe from terrorism, our liberty is at stake.

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9 / 11

On September eleventh, 2001 New York went through a traumatic experience :
A group of terrorists hijacked four planes and flew two of them into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center, so the highest buildings of Manhatten started to collapsed and burned.
More than hundred firefighters risked their own lives to trying put out the fire and rescue survivors who had been trapped in their office, but not everybody could be saved. Almost 3,000 people were killed on that tragic 9/11 because they were buried under the derbis or they choked in the fire as they were not be able to get out of the skyscrapers anymore. Some people decided to commit suicide by throwing themselves out of the top-floor windows to escape such a terrible death.
Today Ground Zero, the place where the Twin Towers once stood, is a memorial to the victims and in a way their graveyard, where relatives and friends of the dead gather to mourn for them. This is why I think Americans should not rebuild the towers, at least not at Ground Zero.
9 / 11 has been one of the darkest days for the USA and for Western democracies in general because it made everybody realize how vulnerable they were. If the most powerful country with the best security systems ever had not been able to prevent such a babaric attack, what about the other countries?
They can attack Germany, too.

All in all, 9/11 has opened our eyes to the fact that we are not safe from terrorism, and our liberty is at stake.

 

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9 / 11

On September eleventh, 2001, New York went through a traumatic experience :
A group of terrorists hijacked four planes and hit two of them into the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center, the power of the collision was so great that the highest buildings of Manhatten started to collapse and burn.
More than hundred firefighters risked their  lives to extinguish  the fire and rescue survivors,s who had been trapped in their offices, but all of them could not be saved. Almost 3,000 people lost their lives in that tragic event, because they were buried under the derbis or they choked in the fire as they were not be able to get out of the skyscrapers anymore. Some people decided to commit suicide by throwing themselves out of the top- floor windows to escape such a terrible death.
Today Ground Zero, the place where the Twin Towers once stood, is a memorial to the victims and in a way their graveyard where relatives and friends of the dead gather to mourn for them. This is why i think the Amerikans should not rebuild the Towers, at least not at Ground Zero.
9 / 11 was one of the darkest days for the USA and the Western democracies in general because it made everybody realize how much vulnerable they were. If the most powerful country with the best security systems ever was not able to prevent such a babaric attack, what about the other countries?
They can attack germany to.

All in all, 9/11 has opened our eyes to the fact that we are not safe from terrorism, our liberty is at stake.

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