21,2015

How time flies! One day has already gone, then and the next day is coming. Reading some books is really helpful for me to be calm and wiser. Filled with all kinds information, as politics, and entertainment news, and other relevant news from the internet, [my head is chaotic].
Sometimes I really have need of them to kill time, however, when I looks back on the time spend in the internet, I can’t remember how it goes what happened and I have a feeling of I'm wasting my life. I always pretend to be too busy in to acquire acknowledge, scared of being slowed down.
How awful my the life I live it is(?). My expected live is rewarding to remember, not regret to remember.
As the time passes, I want to become more knowledgeable instead of only more mature(?).
In fact, I have little interest in reading, but I still think it's not too late for me to form it begin. Better late than never. When I debate with someone, the opinions I come up with are kind of shallow, I think. Whether I am at school or not, reading is important to me equally.
In the beginning, I looked(?) forward to improving my writing, and I believed that language doesn’t matter, thus, what I need to do urgently is to express my feelings more exactly openly(?). Some articles my friends recommend show great maturity and humanity, I will read them first in my book(?) list.
Lol..please correct my diary .

General Notes:

--Any instance of "I" (first person identifier) needs to be capitalized.

--All punctuation must come at the end of a word followed by a space.

--I think your opening statement is meant to be an idiom about the day passing by too quickly? It was difficult to correct because I was sure what exactly you were trying to say in regards to the "day has gone" and what followed.

--Items highlighted in red I could not quite understand what you were trying to say or could not fit into a sentence. Life expectancy? Expectations in life?

--You said: "...to become more knowledgeable instead of only more mature." Did you mean 'growing older' or 'aging'? Maturity is generally only used with regard to how a person acts, not their physical age when regarding people. Children are not mature, while adults are (usually) more mature mentally.

--When you 'debate' with someone, you are generally already debating your opinion (your side), so there are rebuttals (a response against the opposing side) or talking points.

--You started with "In the beginning," so what you reference directly after would be in the past tense, as it already happened. However, I am confused by your sentence. I'm not sure if you either liked or disliked the language. Is it possible you meant "...but I believed that language doesn't matter."?

--Last sentence you start with "Some articles..." but then reference "...book list." at the end. Unless you meant "Some books..." at thebeginning, you are better off saying "...reading list." to describe any written materials (newspapers, magazines, internet articles, books, etc).