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Where I have worked before.
Hello everybody,
First I want to say that you should go to Oludeniz/Mugla in Turkey. It is such a beautiful place to see and take a vacation in. Actually there are lots of English people living in Mugla (almost more than Turkish people), and I really liked the English culture.
I just went to the Fethiye to improve my English and first I found a hotel to work at and my job there was guest relations. *It was not difficult for me cause there were friends who could help me talk in English and about other things but I really did not like to work in a hotel and so I quit the my work*. I was thinking of going back to my city but it was too early to go back. I think I was so lucky cause I found a job and it was what I had wished for. The job was about organizing beach weddings. People coming from Londan to get married in Turkey is exciting. I lived there for 4 months and I had lots of good days.
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It was hard for me to understand you, but that is why you are practicing. So nice job! The sentence with **: in English it is not good practice to write really long sentences attached with many commas (,). Some writers do this deliberately, but usually you want to keep 1 or 2 thoughts per sentence, and start a new sentence for the next thought(s).
Let me know if you need more of an explanation.
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