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Watch your mouth. I heard the news that two women were sexually assaulted by one man. After sexual assault, the man had them take a naked photo and then he ran away. Two women called the police right away the suspect was arrested. When one of my co-workers read this news her got angry to the two victims very much. I didn't understand why she got angry to them! And she said "These news makes me mad! Especially their stupid behavior. Look, how foolish they were! I can't understand how could they did that even though they were two! Were there any solution to prevent or attack the criminal? I don't understnad it." She didn't stop bombarding rough words for a while after that. I think she has to try to put herself in the person's shoes. I can say she is one of the worst talkative I've met ever. The more I hear something from her, the more I don't want to get along with her.

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Watch your mouth.

I heard the news that two women were sexually assaulted by one man.
After the sexual assault, the man had them take a naked photo and then he ran away.
The two women called the police right away and the suspect was arrested.

When one of my co-workers read this news her she got very angry at to the two victims very much.
I didn't understand why she got so angry to at them!

And she said, "These This news makes me mad! Especially their stupid behavior. Look how foolish they were! I can't understand how they could they did do that even though they there were two of them! Were there any solutions to prevent it or attack the criminal? I don't understand it."

She didn't stop bombarding (I don't think this word is quite right. Maybe something more like, "spouting" would work better.) rough words for a while after that.

I think she has to try to put herself in the other persons' (Since there were two of them, I put the apostrophe after the "s".) shoes.
I can say that she is one of the worst talkative people I've ever met ever.
The more I hear something from her, the more I don't want to get along with her.

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