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A love story A long time ago I knew a gorgeous girl in a pub, we started to talk each other and hit it off. The following weeks we're dating and after a while we fell head over heels. I was in love with her and I though she had the same feeling. The years passed and our relationship became stronger,we were in a long-term committed relationship so I was thinking to pop the question and hopefully tie the knot. I was preparing to this idea but one day I discovered she made sex with another man, I was really angry because she cheated on me. I started to think she was sleeping around and we began to argue about everything; my relationship with her was on the rocks and after a while she broke up with me. She break my heart, I would have listened my best friend he always said she was going to beark my heart. Now I'm suffering but I think I have a room to grow.

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A love story

A long time ago I knew a gorgeous girl in a pub, we started to talk each other and hit it off.

In the following weeks we started dating and after a while we fell head over heels.

I was in love with her and I thought she had the same feeling.

The years passed and our relationship became stronger, we were in a long-term committed relationship so I was thinking to pop the question and hopefully tie the knot. I was preparing for this idea but one day I discovered she had sex with another man, I was really angry because she cheated on me.
I started to think she was sleeping around and we began to argue about everything; my relationship with her was on the rocks and after a while she broke up with me.


She broke my heart, I should have listened to my best friend, he always said she was going to break my heart.
Now I'm suffering but I think I have a room to grow.

 

Good use of idioms! Sorry about how this story ends, I hope a better one is around the corner. 

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