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A good day :) I'm a fastidious girl because I am perfectionist. I don't like playing while studying and relaxing while working. So many my friends and colleagues don't like talking to me. I have been sad, I feel so lonely and ideologogical. TT TT Lately, I try smile with everyone and talked to them more. I gave a amazing result. Everyone started smiling with me and entangling me in your discussion, sharing funny pictures and clips for me. I'm so freely and happy So, I think smiling is very improtant in a relationship. It is a key to open a relationship, isn't it?

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A good day :)

I'm a fastidious girl because I am a perfectionist. I don't like playing while studying and relaxing while working. So many of my friends and colleagues don't like talking to me. I have been sad, I feel so lonely and ideologogical. TT TT
Lately, I try to smile with everyone and talked to them more. This gave an amazing result. Everyone started smiling with me and entangling engaging me in your discussion, sharing funny pictures and clips for me. I'm so freely and happy
So, I think smiling is very important in a relationships. It is a key to open a relationships, isn't it?

 

Hi, I made some corrections. Hope it helps. Yep smiling is great. I think this video is also about what your note is about -Put a smile on your face! Don't worry, be happy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d-diB65scQU

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Hi, how are you! I come from China, I can make friends with you, I want to learn your English

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