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I have a rest Rest
My family is big and there aren't any moments when you are alone at home. Somebody is near every all the time and always asking you for something. They ask you to do something this or that, somebody comes in, somebody goes out; everyday we have a there is movement in our house. somebody talk, somebody cry, somebody look at you whithout a word We talk, cry, look at each other without speaking. Everyday. everytime. and However, today is the day when nobody is at home has been home all the day. Nobody. it is the I have rest. i can do nothing and do nothing for this one day. But the life is boring when you are alone. Tomorrow there will be life in my life.
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Rest
My family is big and there aren't any moments when you are alone at home. Somebody is near you every all the time and always asking you for something. They ask you to do this or that, somebody comes in, somebody goes out; everyday there is movement in our house. We talk, cry, look at each other without speaking. Everyday. However, today nobody has been home all the day. Nobody.I rest and do nothing for this one day. But life is boring when you are alone. Tomorrow there will be life in my life.
As much as I liked this sentence, "somebody talk, somebody cry, somebody look at you without a word," I had to cut it because the 'somebodys' were too much. I get the meaning in the last sentence, but I would think of using different words. Using life twice doesn't really give it the emphasis you'd think it would.
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