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I have a rest my family is big. there is no moment when you are alone at home. somebody is near everytime. somebody always ask you something, ask you to do something, somebody come in, somebody go out, everytime we have a movement in our house. somebody talk, somebody cry, somebody look at you whithout a word. everyday everytime. and today is the day when nobody is at home all the day. nobody. it is the rest. i can do nothing and i do nothing. one day. but the life is boring when you are alone. tomorrow will be life in my life.

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I have a rest   Rest

My family is big and there aren't any moments when you are alone at home. Somebody is near every all the time and always asking you for something. They ask you to do something this or that, somebody comes in, somebody goes out; everyday we have a there is movement in our house. somebody talk, somebody cry, somebody look at you whithout a word We talk, cry, look at each other without speaking. Everyday. everytime. and However, today is the day when nobody is at home has been home all the day. Nobody. it is the I have rest. i can do nothing and do nothing for this one day. But the life is boring when you are alone. Tomorrow there will be life in my life.

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Rest

My family is big and there aren't any moments when you are alone at home. Somebody is near you every all the time and always asking you for something. They ask you to do this or that, somebody comes in, somebody goes out; everyday there is movement in our house. We talk, cry, look at each other without speaking. Everyday. However, today nobody has been home all the day. Nobody.I rest and do nothing for this one day. But life is boring when you are alone. Tomorrow there will be life in my life.

 

As much as I liked this sentence, "somebody talk, somebody cry, somebody look at you without a word," I had to cut it  because the 'somebodys' were too much.  I get the meaning in the last sentence, but I would think of using different words. Using life twice doesn't really give it the emphasis you'd think it would.

Good job!

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I meant that the real life for every person is the life among your close relatives and other people but not alone
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I understood everything pretty well. I think your grammar is correct. Keep practicing! Just at the end, when you said: "tomorrow will be life in my life." What were you trying to express?
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there are no mistakes here?

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