Long but Interesting Business Tour...

Hello Everyone...

I wanted to write something in paper and try to find my mistakeS(,) then I thought of THE iTalki notebook(,) which is a option. People will help me to identify my mistakeS.
I went ON A business tour for a day(,) but IT was extended for two ADDITIONAL days. It was amazing. I really like train traveling. I really enjoy that. I love to read novels, watch movies(,) and eat food at different stationS.  Those thingS makE me crazy about it. After two day of a hectice schedule, while I was returning(,) I prayed to god TO please provide me WITH a better seat ON THE train so I could GET SOME proper sleep(,) SO THAT THE next day I WOULD BE ABLE TO work at THE office. It was a FULL night traveling.
When I got TO my seat. There was NO ONE in my compartment. After 10 minutes(,) 7 ladies came and they were next to my seat. They were extremely talkative. I opened a novel and starting TO read(,) but I was tired and I wantED TO rest. I could not concentrate on reading.  I wanted to ASK those ladies, "When are you planNing TO sleep?" I DID not dare to say that. I DIDN'T know IF they MIGHT feel bad(,) but within a minute one of the ladIES said, "IT HAS BEEN A long time SINCE we met, we will chitchat THE whole time." I was literally crying inside. I tASKED god, "Hey God!!!! You help everyone(,) but HOW is THIS my fault? Why did you do that?"....After an HOUR and A half(,) THE ticket-checker came and I requested A SEAT change. He told me, "I will check and update you." I think after 15 minutes(,) Mr. Ticket-checker was coming towards me. Yes(,) he came to me and told ME, "One seat is vacant, you can transfer to that place. I will give your seat to another person." I said, "THANK YOU GOD.... "
I went to THE new seat with ALL OF my luggage. I was laying on THE seat and startED reading A novel. When I changed pageS I said, "Thank you god for this place." It was SO SILENT YOU COULD HEAR A PI DROP. ONLY RARELY DOES god give you WHAT YOU ASK FOR, but it happened in my case.. One by one I READ THE pageS and it WAS time to sleep. I was feeling SO sleepY. Suddenly(,) I HEARD loud snorING soundS... OH MY GOD.. A 45-year-OLD MAN was sleeping next to my seat. He HAD JUST started snoring... NOT AGAIN!!!!!!! It WAS WORSE... IN THE Old seat WIDE-AWAKE Ladies(,) and IN THE New Seat Snoring Uncle... SO I COULD NOT SLEEP PROPERLY(!)

Good Night!!!!!!