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My first notebook entry, please correct! 晚上好。我是vickie 。我是英国人 。我喜欢紫色 。我学生会计 。

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My first notebook entry, please correct!

晚上好。我是vickie 。我是英国人 。我喜欢紫色 。我学生会计 。

 

How about:

晚上好,我是英国的薇琪。我的专业是会计。我喜欢紫色!

 

Some sentences are too short. BTW, Chinese like commas more than that you can image!

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My first notebook entry, please correct!

晚上好。我是vickie 。我是英国人 。我喜欢紫色 。我是会计学专业的学生 。

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我学生会计  Your major is accounting? 我的专业是会计。 专业-ZHUAN YE= major :) Hope this helps

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我学生会计 因为我知道你学的是会计,学什么都是学生,所以 我改成(我学会计)
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My first notebook entry, please correct!

晚上好。我是vickie 。我是英国人 。我喜欢紫色 。我学会计 。

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