my first writing
good day, my name is Alondra and this is my first writing. I am on this web page because I would like to learn english and usually I have many problems with my pronunciation and I'am so shy to talk in public.
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My First Writing
Good day, my name is Alondra and this is my first writing. I am on this web page because I would like to learn English and usually I have many problems with (my) pronunciation (There are several ways you could modify this sentence to make it sound a bit better, but it still makes sense as is.). and I'am so too shy to talk in public.
Buena suerte con su aprendizaje de inglés!
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My First Writing
Good day. My name is Alondra, and this is my first writing. I am on this web page because I would like to learn English, and usually I have many problems with my pronunciation, and I am so shy to talk in public.
Alternate last sentence: I am on this web page because I would like to learn English. Because I have many problems with my pronunciation, and I am shy about talking in public.
Good work, Alondra. Your ideas are clear. You communicate well. I suggested an alternative to your last sentence. A reader would understand what you are saying, but the alternative is slightly clearer.
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If you don't mind me asking how did you learn English? You're English is really good from what i can see and hopefully i could use some of your tips to help me learn Korean! And you shouldn't worry when talking to native speakers in public because many people appreciate when someone is learning their native language and will tend to be more easygoing to the learner!
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