My thoughts about life

Our lives are unpredictable. Nobody knows what happens in any moment. So people should value every second of time, and not waste it doing useless things. Enjoy every moment of your life. Unfortunately nowadays most people don't pay attention to it, they just spend their time doing nothing, so their whole life is passing by in such way. It is very important to know the meaning of life, to have the concrete aims and dreams and go towards them in order to acheive them. Life is different for each person. Sometimes it seems everything crumbles down and you feel frustrated, but never give up on your dreams. Even the worst grief may turn out into big happiness tommorow. Hope and trust in God. We are all his creations. And He made us for purpose. So keep on striving for a better life. We all have a choice. All in all, everything happens for a reason. In the end good will come of it.

[Very good.  Just minor errors.  In English, if we use a pronoun to refer to God, we alway capitalize it.  Ex: God told Moses that He would give him His commandments.  The second 'he' refers to Moses and then is not capitalized.]