My vacation to Australia
In the beginning of this month, I, with my family, have taken a trip to Australia and spent more than 10 days there. I should say that this land is deserved to be the most confortable place for living. Even in winter, it was not too cold to be outside, especially in Gold Coast.
Comparing to Sydney, the most modern and developed city which is so smiliar to ShangHai, I prefer Gold Coast. Gold Coast is famous for its beach and surfing. its weather is good as well. So it's ordinary to see people surfing and swimming in the sea in winter.
About the environment, it's more like a big park, with forrest and wild animals. there are so many crows and other birds there. In highway, it's not surprise to notice marks of caution about Koalas and Kangeroos, who may cross the road some time.
the life there is simple and relax. I strongly recommend to visit Australia and I will go there when I have time and money.
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My vacation to in Australia
In At the beginning of this month, with my family and I , have taken took a trip to Australia and spent more than 10 days there. I should say that this land is deservedly considered to be the a most comfortable place for living. Even in winter, it was not too cold to be outside, especially in the Gold Coast.
I prefer the Gold Coast Comparing to Sydney (the a most modern and developed city which is so very similar to Shanghai), I prefer Gold Coast. Gold Coast is famous for its beaches and surfing; its weather is good as well. So it's ordinary usual to see people surfing and swimming in the sea even in winter.
About the environment, it's Australia is more like a big park, with forests and wild animals; there are so many crows and other birds there. On the country highways, it's no surprise to notice see marks roadsigns warning of caution about Koalas and Kangaroos and wombats, who which may cross the road some at any time.
the Life there is simple and relaxed. I strongly recommend to a visit to Australia and I will go there again when I have time and money.
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My vacation to Australia
At the beginning of this month, my family and I took a trip to Australia and spent more than 10 days there. I should say that this country deserves to be called the most comfortable place to live. Even in winter, it was not too cold outside, especially on the Gold Coast.
Compared to Sydney, which is the most modern and developed city, and which is similar to Shanghai, I prefer the Gold Coast. The Gold Coast is famous for its beaches and surfing. Its weather is good as well. So it's normal to see people surfing and swimming in the sea in winter.
As for the environment, it's more like a big park, with forests and wild animals. There are so many crows and other birds there. On the highway, it's not surprising to see caution signs about koalas and kangaroos, which may cross the road at any time.
Life there is simple and relaxed. I strongly recommend a visit to Australia, and I will go back there when I have time and money.
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Hi Tommas. My correction uses the words "the Gold Coast". This context means the coastline and beaches in that area in general, and sounds more natural in American English. However, if the name of the city itself is just "Gold Coast", then you are correct in your original notebook that the word "the" does not have to be before the name of the city.
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