きつねは
狐は森に住んでいます。
オレンジと白いです。
ちいさいですでも大きい尾がいます。
Hopefully this means:
Foxes live in the forest.
They are orange and white.
They are small, but have big tails.
I'm fairly new to Japanese, but decided to try writing a very small text as practice.
Please correct any mistakes and explain what I did wrong! (Would Japanese want a comma somewhere in the last sentence or not? Is the title any good?)
ありがとうございます! :D
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きつねは
狐は森に住んでいます。
色はオレンジと白いです。※と is used between nouns.
ちいさいですでもが、大きい尾しっぽがいあります/しっぽを持<も>っています。 ※尾 is a stiff word. ※いる/います・・animate, ある/あります・・inanimate
Hopefully this means:
Foxes live in the forest.
They are orange and white.
They are small, but have big tails.
ありがとうございますよろしくお願<ねが>いします! :D ※よろしくおねがいします。I hope you will take care of me.=Thanking you in advance. To say ありがとう(ございます) is strange because you haven't known whether someone gives you a favor. It might be a correct expression in English. But in Japanese, we don't say "ありがとう(ございます) Thank you" before we know someone gives us a favor.
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