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I have called a series of my works 'human-books'. I am convinced that every person presents(?) a book with its specific content. We read through some of books and then put them back on the shelf for the rest of the time (or 'then keep them in cold storage'?). We read the other ones for our whole life, going back to the on and on to the most precious passages again and again. And only a few books become a part of us: we take them with us wherever we go and search for advice and support in their lines.(or just in them?).
I made photos of the students who study in my university. I am sure that an univeristy is a place where young people can find their calling in life and where their personality gets shaped. I chose this category of people because I wanted to catch the very moment when a person starts writting their own book adding a new chapter into it every day. I wanted to create (draw?) meaning out of ordinary portraits and show the individuality of every student by reflecting their inner world, worries and interests in my photos.
Having seen my works you must have noticed that they are black and white with some vintage effect. However, there are some colourful items which are located on the books. That wasn't made by accident. By putting them in colour I wanted to show that due to these items symbolise their hobbies, interests and characters. Their "books" are full of meaning and purpose.
I think we don't have to become a writers to create interesting books about our lives.
Hi, I made some corrections hope they are useful. The question mark after "presents" is because I was not sure what you meant. Can you change the sentence to make it clearer?
Interesting writing, is it for an exhibition?
Thanl you for any help
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