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The Rose I have a rose. It's beautiful, red and a little small, I like see everyday, two or three times in the day. She need much water when It is hot. Sometimes I don't have time and I watered the rose. It's a homework that need a little time. But It's very good the gratification. Thanks!

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The Rose

I have a rose. It's beautiful, red, and small. I like to see it two or three times a day, every day. two or three times in the day.   

It needs much a lot of water when it is hot. Sometimes, I don't have time to water the rose. It's a homework chore that needs requires a little time but is very good the gratifying.


Thanks!

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The Rose

I have a rose, it's beautiful, red and a little small. I like see it everyday, at least two or three times a day.
It needs alot of water when it is hot. Sometimes, I don't have much time to water the rose.

 

It's  a job  that need time and effort, but It's very good gratification in the end.


Thanks!

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