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Another day in paradise
Today working here in the most beautiful city of Colombia, Medellín. A place where you can find beautiful and really nice people really nice and beautiful people. Also You can also find here some peaceful parks here and also you can and/as well as have fun with other people there in them.
In Medellín you can find many places where you can buy stuff of any kind, from clothes to souvenirs and, of course, dining.
We have different activities here depending on the day you come when you arrive. In May for the 2-wheel lovers we have the 2 Two Wheel Fair for the two wheel lovers, on in June we have a Comic Con event, and in August we have the Flower Fair (it is one of our most loved events because we show some of our culture and the work of our people)
We have good night entertainment such as discos, humor comedy events, football and* (*"as well as" would be better here) many other things.
As you can see I am in love with my city and you are invited to visit us.
Have a nice day and thanks for reading.
This is my first notebook on Italki
Well done! This was very well written! There were just a few issues with word order and the choice of words, but by the looks of it, you're going to be writing extremely well before long!
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