hello~everybody
I am yan,25,from china.I came here in order to improve my English.I love English,though my English is not good enough.I am easy going and like making friends all over the world.I only can speak chinese very well.it's my native language.If someone want to learn it,I can help you.It's snowy today.I have so long no see snow...nice to meet you all~~
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hello~everybody
I am yan,25,from china.I came here in order to improve my English.I love English,though my English is not good enough.I am easy going and like making friends all over the world.I only can speak chinese very well.it's my native language.If someone want to learn it,I can help you.It's snowy today.I have so long no see snow...nice to meet you all~~Corrections:
My name is Yan and I am from China. I am 25 years old. I came here to improve my English. Although my English is imperfect, I love learning English. I am easy going and like making friends all over the world. I only can speak Chinese very well as it is my native language. If someone would like to learn it, I can help you. It's snowy today. It has been a long time since I have seen snow...nice to meet you all!
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thank you very much~~:)
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Snewcomer makes a flawless correction but I would add the observation that "My name is Yan and I am from China. I am 25 years old." is the same as "I am yan,25,from china" with the only exception being that the correction is a bit formal. The original would be more common in a casual greeting.
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