Well done Pauline. Some really excellent sentences in this! Apart from the last sentence, all are just small errors.

Tom

Could anybody correct it please? Thanks.

Which is more important: improving people's standard of living or protecting the environment.

Nowadays, many countries should need to improve people's standard of living giving them more opportunities of employment, especially to young people which who find it less easy to set themselves up due to a lack of vacancies.

Firstly, governments should create more job fields developing technology and associating it with natural resources in order to keep our environment safe. Eventhough this could be quite difficult to persuade people  who helping out with the environment. However, thanks to modern technology items we could increase programs where people save up money in from electricity bills such as using the use of solar energy in all buildings.

Secondly, every individual person should have a place where to live in order to avoid home less people around  throughout big cities. If governments succeeded to deal with these society issues, many people would have a better standard of living.

Finally, I believe each of us should take care of our environment before it is too late being too late for it and as a consequence our children can grow up on in a better planet. Although it often looks like politicians do not care about improving the quality of life for the population. not minding about improving population life for politicians.