Something about my thesis, could someone help me correcting this?

I did my final undergraduate project on image processing., It was about wood images. Nowadays in Colombia there are at least 20 wood tree species in danger of extinction, due to illegal trade. The traffickers are still at work doing this activity because it's much more profitable, to exttract extracts certain amounts of wood by an illegally way than doing it legally. So the Universidad Distrital has a big project, they are focusing on the far future, trying to achieve an automatic identification of wood using wood image samples to prevent this problem.

Sounds like a good plan to me.