My last holiday
I went to Egypt a few years ago with my boyfriend. I was in a boat through Nilo river for seven days and the other seven days I was in Luxor and in El Cairo city. El Cairo was crowded of cars and people. I was ill some days because the weather was very hot but when we arrived to Urgada were more comfortable because we were in the beach. The people were very nice and the El Cairo's piramyds were wonderful. I think that all the people should visit Egypt one in their life, his history is amazing.
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My last holiday
I went to Egypt a few years ago with my boyfriend. I was rode a boat through the Nilo River for seven days. and The other seven days I was in were spent in Luxor and in El Cairo city. El Cairo was crowded with cars and people.
I was ill some days because the weather was very hot but when we arrived in Urgada, I was more comfortable because we were on (or at) the beach. The people were very nice and the El Cairo's pyramids were wonderful. I think that all the people should visit Egypt once in their lives, his because its history is amazing.
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A few minor corrections but i understood it well enough
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My last holiday
I went to Egypt a few years ago with my boyfriend. I was in a boat through Nilo river for seven days and the other seven days I was in Luxor and in El Cairo city. El Cairo was crowded of with cars and people. I was ill some days because the weather was very hot. But when we arrived to Urgada we were more comfortable because we were in at the beach. The people were very nice and the El Cairo's pyramids were wonderful. I think that all the people should visit Egypt one once in their life, his history is amazing.
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