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message Dear sir, I am Bara Hamayde, from Palestine, and I am studying Industrial Engineering at An-Najah National University. I am writing to apply for internships in your company, since I will have a second semester training course at the end of Jun 2016, to apply my experience and knowledge in the related field, in highly growing company like yours. I've attached my Resume to you, so please find the attached file. I am looking forward to hearing form you very soon Thank you Kindly Regards, Bara Hamayde

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Dear Sir*,

I am Bara Hamayde, from Palestine, and I am studying Industrial Engineering at An-Najah National University.

I am writing to *apply for internships in your company, since I will have a second semester training course at the end of June 2016.  *I would like to apply my experience and knowledge in the related field, in a highrapidly growing company like (such as yours).

I've attached my Resumé to you, so please find the attached file.
I am looking forward to hearing from you very soon

(Thank you) 
Kindly Regards,
Bara Hamayde

 

* Sir / Madam  if you do not know the gender of the person who will deal with your letter

*perhaps  'to enquire about an internship with your company'

*original sentence too long

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Dear sir, 


I am Bara Hamayde, from Palestine, and I am studying Industrial Engineering at An-Najah National University.

I am writing to apply for internships in your company, since I will have a second semester training course at the end of June 2016, to apply my experience and knowledge in the related field, in a highly growing company like yours.

I've attached my resume to this message, so please find the attached file.
I am looking forward to hearing from you very soon

Thank you
Kind Regards,
Bara Hamayde

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