I'm going to tell a story in English with new words. Could you please check it?

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Hi, friends!

Yesterday, I watched a film in English with English subtitles, and now I want to write a story using new words. Don't pay any attention to the meaning; it's ridiculous but that's not so important.))
Check my English please! Thank you in advance!

A couple had built a house out of twigs, but living in it wasn't so comfortable. They figured out a plan from the very beginning, and they decided to live there only during the summer. The wife started out to cook in oven took up baking because she had an innate ability to cook well. The husband was always on the go because he had a pair of roller blades.

Phrase pattern: an innate ability to [verb] 

To take up [activity] - to begin an activity as a habit. If the activity is a verb, use the gerund: to bake -> baking

On the go means going from one place to another, always busy. "Always moving" could mean he is sitting in a chair but moving his arms.

One day, along the way to the house on the way home from his seal hunting he encountered with something suspiciously fictitious. He saw a very astonishing bush and he aspired to leap over it. He was obsessed with the flavours of that bush. Yet he fell down and hit his shin splints against the ground.

Encounter always needs an object. No prepositions. Encounter [something].

It was in a realm where he shouldn't leap, though his decision was spontaneously. When he returned to his wife he was scared stiff. She was looking for affordable fares for their flight. Yet when she saw her husband, she began trying to embolden him. They both made a vow to each other not to hang out around unknown locations. Thus they kept their vows in effect till the end of their journey.

Remember that adjectives (not adverbs) go with to be: was spontaneous.

Bring up ___ has several meanings. It could mean raise a child, take someone upstairs, introduce a topic, or even vomit! I think you meant something encouraging, so maybe embolden (to make bold) is the word you want.

One couple built a house out of twigs. Living in it wasn`t so comfortable. They figured it out from the very beginning and they decided to live there at least during the summer. The woman started out to cook in the oven because she had an innate ability for cooking. The man was always moving because he wore roller blades. 

One day along the way to the house from his seal hunting he encountered (with suspicious fiction) this part doesn't make sense. He saw a very astonishing bush and he aspired to leap above it. He was obsessed with the colors? of that bush. And he fell down and hit his shins on the ground.

It was a realm where he shouldn`t leap. And his decision was spontaneous. When he came back to his wife he was too scared. She was looking for an affordable flight fare. And when she saw her husband she kept trying to (bring up him) this part doesn't make sense. They make the vows to each other not to hang out in unknown locations. And they kept their vows in effect till the end of the journey.

I tell the story in English with new words. Please check it!

Hi, friends! 

A couple built a house out of twigs. Living in it wasn`t so comfortable. They figured this out from the very beginning but they decided to live there for the summer, at least. The woman cooked on the stove, she had an innate talent for cooking. The man was always moving because he had roller blades.

One day, on the way home from seal hunting, he encountered something very suspicious. He saw a very astonishing bush and he aspired to leap above it. He was obsessed with the flavors of that bush. He fell down and hit his shin on the ground.

It was a realm where he shouldn`t leap but his decision was spontaneous. When he got back to his wife he was scared. She was looking for an affordable flight. When she saw her husband she kept trying to bring it up with him. They made a vow to each other not to walk through unknown locations. And they kept their vow intact till the end of their journey.