Sentence check
Bonjour!
Could someone please check these sentences for my GCSE exam; it won't take long- probable just 2-3 mins.
1) Les deux que je préfère le plus, sont la pop et, le plus, la musique classique.
=I am not very sure with the 'et, le plus' section. I want to say that I like classical music more than pop.
2) Non seulement ça déchire mes oreilles car c’est vraiment bruyant, mais, pour moi, c’est aussi un tas de cris
= The aussi fits there ok, right?
3) Le seul point négatif était que nous étions serrés...
= The only negative was; is that first part ok or does it need alternations?
4) Je m’habillais déjà comme je suis maintenant et j’ai choisi la musique classique et pop parce qu’ils me conviennent.
= In that first part I want to say "I have always been dressing like how I dress now" (but not word for word; I want to say it in a shorter version). Is the right meaning conveyed?
Merci beaucoup!
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