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I feel very happy.because I talk to different peple in different country.I feel all of them are very kindness.I like Engish gradualy.And now my plan is to work hard ,enjoy lifes to go france,make more friends .i love the modern day,due to it ,I can talk to you anytime and anywhere.
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I feel very happy0
talked to.. people*... countries... By the way the "in" here could be ambiguous because it also sounds like you talked to them "in" their countries, face to face, as if you were in their countries too. Therefore a better alternative would be "different people from different..."
All of them are very kind, kindness is a noun that a man can only have, not to be.
Gradually, double the l.
Enjoy (my) life, you only have one life. Remember that.
France, not france.
France, and make... better have an "and" added here.
I not i
A better rephrase for the very last sentence: I love modern society/the advanced modern telecommunication, because of which, I can... (due to is fine here but sounds a bit weird).
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The last sentence in my correction has a typo. It should read", "...on account of it I can talk to you anytime...
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tonight
I feel very happy.because I talk talked to different people in different country countries. I feel all of them are very kindness. I like Engish gradually more and more. And now my plan is to work hard , enjoy lifes life to go to fFrance, and to make more friends . i I love the modern day world because due to on account it I can talk to you anytime and anywhere.
We more often day "I'm happy" rather than "I feel happy."
We often say that people are very "nice" and I think that word fits here. "Kind" is OK because it means friendly, generous or warnhearted but has a more specific meaning than what you are saying in this sentence, namely describing persons who act with consideration or sympathy.
In a sentence in which you list a number of things separated by commas, the last entry is usually preceded by a word like and or or.
There are specific grammar rules governing the use of "due to," although many Americans don't follow them. Due to is acceptable when due functions as a predicate adjective following a linking verb: His hesitancy was due to fear. When due to introduces an adverbial phrase that assigns the reason for, or cause of, the action denoted by a non-linking verb alternatives to due to are used: because of, on account of, through and owing to.
When typing, we leave one blank space after a comma and two blank spaces after a period. That makes it easier on our eyes.
We more often day "I'm happy" rather than "I feel happy."
We often say that people are very "nice" and I think that word fits here. "Kind" is OK because it means friendly, generous or warnhearted but has a more specific meaning than what you are saying in this sentence, namely describing persons who act with consideration or sympathy.
In a sentence in which you list a number of things separated by commas, the last entry is usually preceded by a word like and or or.
There are specific grammar rules governing the use of "due to," although many Americans don't follow them. Due to is acceptable when due functions as a predicate adjective following a linking verb: His hesitancy was due to fear. When due to introduces an adverbial phrase that assigns the reason for, or cause of, the action denoted by a non-linking verb alternatives to due to are used: because of, on account of, through and owing to.
When typing, we leave one blank space after a comma and two blank spaces after a period. That makes it easier on our eyes.
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tonight
I feel very happyness.because I talk to different peple in different country.I feel all of them are very kindness.I like Engish gradualy.And now my plan is to work hard ,enjoy lifes to go france,make more friends .i love the modern day,due to it ,I can talk to you anytime and anywhere.Want to progress faster?
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