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Program for next august
Hi,
In august me and my family would like to spend a couple of weeks in London.
We have thoght it could be a good experience to rent a flat and try to live like a londoners.
I start to flip some website, like homeaway airbnb but, if some of you have a good tip i'm all ears.
Bye
Did you mean to say "I started to flip through some websites" ? In the US we just usually say "I checked out some websites" or "I've started to look at several websites".. hope that helps!
A couple more changes for you:
Program for next August
Hi,
In August me and my family and I would like to spend a couple of weeks in London.
We have thought it could be a good experience to rent a flat and try to live like a londoners (like a Londoner or like Londoners without 'a'. Also, I'd probably say We thought...without 'have').
I start to flip some website, like homeaway airbnb but, if some of you have a good tip I'm all ears.
Bye
Program for next august
Hi,
In august me and my family would like to spend a couple of weeks in London.
We have thoght that (all reporting verbs would need a 'that') it could be a good experience to rent a flat and try to live like a londoners.
I started to flip some (few) websites, like homeaway airbnb, etc., but, if some ('any' is better) of you have a good tip i'm all ears.
Bye
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