Wrong Confusion Addition

Hello overone   

Hi, my name is Luiz Picolo. I live in Brazil, on Mato Grosso do Sul, at Nova Andradina. i want so learn English because i am a programmer and this new language learn will help me with news culture.

Hello everyone,

My name is Luiz Picolo. I am from Brazil. I live in Mato Grosso do sul, Nova Andradina. I want to learn English because I am a programmer and learning English will help me understand a new culture. 

Notes: When you tell someone where you are from in English it usually goes like this: Hello, My name is Whitney. I am from the United States of America. I live in Raleigh (my city), North Carolina (my state).

Hello everyone

Hi, my name is Luiz Picolo. I live in Brazil, on Mato Grosso do Sul, at Nova Andradina. I want to learn English because I am a programmer and by learning this new language it will help me to know about new cultures. Or It will help me to interat with people from different culture. 

Your English is good Luiz, keep writing and Good luck!