Hello guys, this should be a formal letter, could you help to correct! Thank you!! Emergent!

Firstly, on behalf of our company, I would like to send extend our fully appreciation to for your visiting once more. We had a very pleasant conversation, which leading to a beautiful expectation for our future coorperation and we anticipate a beautiful cooperation in the future. I'm My name is Momo, with regard to the following work, it's mainly me to contact and update with you. and I will be your primary contact.

Referring With regard to the four questions we listed beforehand, we intend to go deeper from two points, courses and the conference.

Cause Since your institute is mainly benefiting benefits to postgraduate studies students as you mentioned, if we would like to hold brief workshops (e.g. 3-5 days) in mainland China. Which and How many, and which, lecturers and which specific techniques/fields of psychotherapy do you could suggest? We went to your website that showing a degree course and found degree details, including course contents/outlines, etc. However, we couldnt ensure the exact courses or lecturers which are possiblely to co-work in this way we couldn't find details on individual lecturers. If possible, could you give us an simple list of the lecturers and specific area they are specialized in, etc? Then, we could have an entire plan begin planning. e.g. i.e. where to start with, and how to arrange step by step.

Morever, regarding to you, Professor Lee, and us to unite the Conference next year, we are considering to work working on a rough sketch with Professor Lee first. When we finished on that, we will send it to you. You are welcomed to amend and complement provide any of your advice on it. The goal of this phase is to make an triple agreement get a consensus on the final proposal of the Conference. Afterwards, according to the proposal, the three parties will devise a list of speakers and complete any invitation work individually (I hope that's what you mean by "respectively"). Our company will also be responsible for all promotional work. we three parties make a speaker list, and complete an invitation work respectively. In addition, we will be responsible for the entire promotion work. All of the speaker' expenses of staying/travelling fees during the period of the conference will be paid by us as well.

BTW, we would like to plan a 2 or 3 days post-conference workshop when finished the Conference. It should be a great opportunity to bloom your profession field in the root of China. Of course, it is better to go further this issue after the agenda of the Conference works out. We are also planning a 2-3 day post-conference workshop. It should be a great opportunity to lay the foundation of your business in China. We'll talk more about this once the conference begins to take shape.

Ok, let me finish here. Also, Please feel free to ask whatever you would like to know about us any questions you have regarding our business.

Expect for I look forward to our cooperation in a near future!

I corrected it as well as I could, but the lady above is correct. I basically had to rewrite your whole letter, and you probably need some help with formal writing.