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Animal abusers should be punished by the law because its the only way people will understand that we must respect animal life. As well, going to jail will teach the abusers the lesson they deserve, and if that its not good enough, multcs ans community work will. With these, putting an end to this will be easier, and abusers will pay that they done.
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Animal abusers should be punished by the law because it's the only way people will understand that we must respect animal life. As well, going to jail will teach the abusers the lesson they deserve, and if that its not good enough, maybe community work will. With these, putting an end to this will be easier, and abusers will pay for that which they have done.
Sounds good to me Esther - all life should be respected.
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Stupid cowards u.u I hope that they approve the law soon, and he will be punish.
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In here Brazil, the parlament create a law to punish the covards, but it still being voted. In the same month, I read a notice which says that a man hurled a little dog from a building, fourth floor. The man isn't punished yet, because he said that the dog jumped, but some people disagree because the dog was so small to jump from the window alone. The dog passed away and nothing could be done. The police still investigating.
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Animal abusers should be punished by the law because its the only way people will understand that we must respect animal life. As well, Going to jail will teach the abusers the lesson they deserve. If that its is not good enough, multcs ans community work will. (needs clarification.) With these laws, putting an end to this abuse will be easier, and abusers will pay that they for what they have done.
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Animal abusers should be punished by the law because its the only way people will understand that we must respect animal life. As well, going to jail will teach the abusers the lesson they deserve, and if that its not good enough, multcs ans {fyi: these are not words} community work will. With these, putting an end to this will be easier, and abusers will pay that they done.
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