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Eu estou aqui de novo eu tenho sido emboro deste website e estudando português mas estou voltar, pronto aprender. Eu sei eu tenho esquecido muito

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(Eu) estou aqui de novo

(Eu) tenho fui sido embora deste website e estudando não tenho estudado Português. Mas estou de voltar, pronto para aprender. (Eu) sei que eu tenho-me esquecido de muito.

 

 

 

The mistakes are in red and suggestions on how to improve the sentences are in blue, based on how we speak in Portugal.
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Eu estou aqui de novo

Eu tenho sido emboro estive ausente deste website e estudando português mas estou voltar voltando, pronto para aprender. Eu sei eu tenho esquecido que esqueci muito.

 

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Red, strikethrough => wrong

blue => Suggestion of what you should write instead the red sentence.

Green => what you forgot to write.

 

I'll try to explain what is wrong in your text, ok?

1) "tenho sido embora" => If you tried to say "I have been away" the correct, in Portuguese, is say "estive fora/ausente". In Portuguese the To Be verb is apart in two verbs: "ser/estar". The "ser" verb is used to express, generally, personal qualities. The "estar" verb is used to express, generally, places, state of mind, etc. 

Ex1: I am beautiful => Eu SOU bonito.

Ex2: I am rich => Eu SOU rico.

Ex3: He is out of control => Ele ESTÁ fora de controle. 

Ex4: He is at home => Ele ESTÁ em casa

Ex5: I have been away from this website => Eu ESTIVE (TENHO ESTADO) ausente deste website.

 

2) "mas estou voltar" => When you use "verb + verb" on a sentence to express the continuous idea, then you have to put the "ndo" in the second verb. 

Ex1: Ele está voltado. 

Ex2: Ele já está indo. 

Ex3: Ele vai almoçando pro trabalho.

 

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Eu estou aqui de novo

eu tenho sido emboro deste website e estudando português mas estou voltar, pronto aprender. Eu sei eu tenho esquecido muito

 

Eu estou aqui de novo

*Eu tenho estado ausente** deste website e não tenho estudado*** português, mas estou de volta****, pronto para# aprender. Eu sei, eu esqueci## muito.


First of all, welcome back! Good text, I will give you a few tips to help you improve :)


* Always use capital letter in the beginning of a sentence.

** The expression 'sido emboro' doesn't exist. You can use 'eu tenho estado ausente' to indicate uou have been away. The form 'tenho estado' indicates an action that began in the past and continues in the present.

***Same thing as before here. You can use 'não tenho estudado' to indicate you haven't been studying Portuguese while you were away. 

**** Here there are two possibilities. The expression 'estou de volta' indicates that you are back, that is, you are definitely back to the website. You can also use 'estou a voltar' but this is a more formal expression and indicates an action that you are starting and that will continue for an indefinite period of time, that is, a slow progression.

# You need the preposition 'para' here. When you are ready, you are ready for something. In Portuguese, when you are 'pronto' you are 'pronto para' something.

##Here it is best to use the past form 'esqueci'. This indicates an action that happened in the past, that was concluded in the past. If you use 'tenho esquecido' it gives the impression that you forgot many things and you are still forgetting things.


Hope this helps you! Keep on the good work :)

 

 

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Eu estou aqui de novo

Eu havia ido embora deste site mas estou voltando a estudar português, pronto para aprender. Eu sei que esqueci muito que havia aprendido.

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Eu estou aqui de novo(ou 'novamente').

Eu havia/tinha ido embora deste site e mas estou voltando a estudar português, pronto para aprender.
Eu sei que eu esqueci(I know that I forgot) muito do que eu tinha/havia aprendido.

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