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I'm very tired. I went to library today. I read books and then found other books. Sadly, I couldn't find books I want. Other people borrowed that books. I borrowed another book. And I studied English workbook. I came back by bus. I sat at the desk to review my workbook but I'm very very tired.........@@ I want to be a person who is good at English. Aw~~ I'll sleep early today.

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I went to the library today. I read some books and then found other books.
Sadly, I couldn't find the books I wanted. Other people had already borrowed that those books, so I borrowed another book and studied an English workbook.
I came back by bus.
I sat at the desk to review my workbook but I'm was very very tired.........@@
I want to be a person who is good at English.
Aw~~ I'll sleep go to bed early today.

 

Notes:

The library/ a library: both are ok.

the book.  That book/ those books.

Good job, try to connect your sentences and make them longer.

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I went to the library today. I read some books and then found some other books.
Sadly, I couldn't find the books I wanted. Other people had already borrowed that those books, so I borrowed another book and studied an English workbook.
I came back by bus.
I sat at the desk to review my workbook but I'm was very very tired.........@@
I want to be a person who is good at English.
Aw~~ I'll sleep go to bed early today.

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