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My sister's wedding My sister's wedding was 15 days ago, everybody were very excited. My sister wore a lovely white dress. We are catholic so there were a mass, the priest spoke about love, life and the dreams, his words were very beatiful. After that we had a party! it was amazing! and I am not exaggerated, the Colombia party is the best! I danced all night so I had a terrible aching feet, I don´t usually to use high heels. :( I took the opportunity to talk with my extended family, some of them lived far and hardly ever come here. I was happy, because it was the firts time that I saw entire my family gathered. In the party happened things very strange, for example my mother was drunk! jeje it was very funny! I never have seen that scene! my father had to take care her, usually it is the other way around. I just have to say that was a beautiful day! I wish my sister to be very happy!

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My sister's wedding

 

My sister's wedding was 15 days ago. everybody were Everyone was very excited. My sister wore a lovely white dress. We are catholic so there were was a mass. The priest spoke about love, life and the pursuing dreams. His words homily?? were was very beautiful. After that we had a party! It was amazing! and I am not exaggerated, exaggerating when I say the Colombian party is parties are the best! I danced all night so I had a terrible aching feet until my feet ached because I'm not used to wearing I don´t usually to use high heels. :(

I took the opportunity to talk with my extended family. Some of them lived live far away and hardly ever come here visit. I was happy, because it this was the firts first time that I ever saw my entire my family gathered in one place.

In At the party, some strange things happened things very strange [or you can say: At the party, some memorable moments transpired], for example my mother was got drunk! jeje Haha! It was very funny because I never have never seen that "scene" before! My father had to take care of her. Usually, it is the other way around.

I just have to say that it was a beautiful day!
I wish my sister to be very happy! The expression here is: I wish my sister and her husband a lifetime of happiness.

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My sister's wedding

My sister's wedding was 15 days ago, everybody were was very excited. My sister wore a lovely white dress. We are catholic so there were was a mass mess. The priest spoke about love, life and the dreams, his words were very beatiful beautiful. After that we had a party! It was amazing! I am not exaggerated exaggerating, the Colombia Colombian parties are the best! I danced all night so I had a terrible aching feet. I don´t usually to use high heels. :(
I took the opportunity to talk with my extended family members, some of them lived far and hardly ever come here. I was happy, because it was the firts first time that I saw my entire  family gathered. 


In At the party,very strange things happend, for example, my mother was drunk! jeje it was very funny! I have never seen that scene before! My father had to take care of her, usually it is the other way around.


I just have to say that it was a beautiful day!
I wish my sister to would be very happy!

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Thanks Kristina!
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My sister's wedding

My sister's wedding was 15 days ago, and everybody were was very excited. My sister wore a lovely white dress. We are catholic so there were was a mass,. The priest spoke about love, life and the dreams. His words were very beautiful. After that we had a party! It was amazing, and I am not exaggerateding! the Colombian parties are the best! I danced all night so I had a terrible aching feet; I don´t usually to use wear high heels. :(
I took the opportunity to talk with my extended family. Some of them lived far and hardly ever come here. I was happy, because it was the firtsfirst time that I saw my entire my family gathered together.  

In During the party very strange things happened. For example, my mother was drunk! jejeHaha, it was very funny! I never have seen that scene! My father had to take care of her, though usually it is the other way around. 


I just have to say, that it was a beautiful day!
I wish my sister to be very happy lots of happiness!

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Great job Johanna! I only entered minor corrections for structure, but the meaning of your words comes through :)

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