Email to a friend in Japan
How is everything? I have decided to visit you in Japan. I already have the ticket. The fly will take off on 25th of July and will land on Tokyo the next day. The fly lasts 25 hours. I would like stay there for 20 days but I just can afford stay 10 days.
When I been in Japan the first thing that I want to do is to eat authentic Japanese shusi. Then, I hope that you show me the city.
I forgot it! Let me know whatever thing you want and I´ll carry it to you from Spain. I know that you miss Spanish food.
See you soon!
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Great Job, Albert! There are several parts that sound really natural and nice. Here are a few ways you can have an even better letter :) Let me know what questions you have. - Ross
Email to a friend in Japan
How is everything? I have decided to visit you in Japan. I already have the ticket. GREAT! The flight will take off on 25th of July and will land in Tokyo the next day. It lasts 25 hours. I would like stay there for 20 days but I can only afford staying 10 days.
When I am in Japan the first thing that I want to do is to eat authentic Japanese sushi. Then, I hope that you show me the city.
I forgot it! Let me know of anything you want and I´ll carry it to you from Spain. I know that you miss Spanish food.
See you soon!
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Email to a friend in Japan
How is everything? I have decided to visit you in Japan. I already have the ticket. The fly flight will take off on 25th of July and will land on in Tokyo the next day. The fly flight lasts 25 hours. I would like stay there for 20 days, but I just can only afford to stay 10 days.
When I been in come to Japan, the first thing that I want to do is to eat authentic Japanese shusi sushi. Then, I hope that you can show me the city.
I forgot it! (?) Let me know whatever thing you want and I´'ll carry bring it to you from Spain. I know that you miss Spanish food.
See you soon!
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Email to a friend in Japan
How is everything? I have decided to visit you in Japan. I already have the ticket. The flight will take off on 25th of July and will land in Tokyo the next day. The flight lasts 25 hours. I would like stay there for 20 days but I just can afford to stay for 10 days.
When I been am/arrive in Japan the first thing that I want to do is to eat authentic Japanese shusi. Then, I hope that you will show me the city.
I forgot it to say! Let me know whatever thing if there is anything that you want and I´ll carry bring it to you from Spain. I know that you miss Spanish food.
See you soon!
Well done, Alberto! An excellent piece of writing. Just a few small things to change, most of which are prepositions! Great work!
Leigh
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