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My first letter to the world
Hi my name is Jonathan, but you can call me Jony. I´m from Mexico, and I want to learn English. i I hope to find someone that who wants to practice whit with me. Barely, I find this page,and it seems so great. So ,I staring start to writte more and more.
I don´t like to talk in English becouse because I don´t know what to say, but I don´t care .I need to practice and practice everyday.
If you want to practice whit with me. that is my skipe and my mail.This is my skype and email. Writte Write to me and tolerate me, please.
Greetings
You are welcome Mr.Jonathan.
You need to revise the use of punctuations.
My first letter to the world
Hi, my name is Jonathan but you can call me Jony... I'm from Mexico and I want to learn English. I hope to find someone that wants to practice with me... I barely found this page (website?), and but it seems so great, so I'm starting to write more and more.
I don't like to talk in English because I don't know what to say, but I don't care. I need to practice and practice everyday.
If you want to practice with me, that is my skype and my email... write me and tolerate me, please.
Greetings
You may have forgotten to input your skype name and email...
And it's somewhat strange to write "greetings" at the end, so I maybe "Thank you" would have been better.
Great job regardless!
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