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An imaginary email to a TV channel advertising company that promotes unhealthy food
7th February 2014
Dear Madam,
I am writing to you to express my disagreement with the contents of some adverts shown at our children´s favorite channel day by day.
To start with you can not imagine how dreadful I felt when I found out that those adverts from a well known fast food company were confusing our children with a fantastic and colourful hamburguer shown as a very light one without naming its ingredients. We can not play with this theme as it is a dangerous one when we consider that children are big fans of hamburguers and all kind of unhealthy fast food. Nevertheless, everybody knows how easily children are persuaded; they must not mbe misled by information they are given.
What is more, we all know, the only aim these companies have in mind is to sell more at any price ,which is intolerable. All ingredients wchich are really light and healthy must be named in the previous sale, as it is not the same a chicken hamburguer as a pork one.
Finally, I would advise you to withdraw all those detrimental spots unless you want to face legal actions from me .
I hope a reply from you soon and looking forward to a fast solution I am saying good bye to you.
Yours sincerely,
Thomas Krawzyck
PS: There was a promotion of giving two dols with the "Happy meal" , a good idea to sell more indeed, but in my opinion, if this company needs a light hamburguer they should start selling those hamburgues without any bread giving more options to the clients.
An imaginary email to a TV channel advertising company that promotes unhealthy food
7th February 2014
Dear Madam,
I am writing to you to express my disagreement with the contents of some adverts shown everyday on our children´s favorite channel day by day.
To start with you can not imagine how dreadful I felt when I found out that those adverts from a well known fast food company were confusing our children with a fantastic and colourful hamburguer shown as a very light one without naming its ingredients. We can not joke about this subject as it is a dangerous one taking into account the fact that children are big fans of hamburgers and all kinds of unhealthy fast food. Nevertheless, everybody knows how easily children are persuaded so they must not misunderstand they information they are being given.
What is more, we all know, the only goal of these companies are achieving is to sell more at any price which is intolerable. All ingredients which are really light and healthy must be listed, as a chicken hamburger is not the same as a pork one.
Finally, I would advise you to withdraw all those detrimental spots (better: advertisements) unless you want to face up legal actions on my part.
I hope a obtain a reply from you soon and I am looking forward to a quick resolution. I am saying good bye to you.
Yours sincerely,
Thomas Krawzyck
PS: There was a promotion of giving two dolls with the "Happy meal" , a good idea to sell more indeed, but in my opinion, if this company needs a light hamburguer they should start selling those hamburgers without any bread giving more options to the clients (better: customers).
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