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山水有心情难休 山水有路径难走,难得逍遥快活游。香云不知山水梦,花柳门前待来翁。我欲相随到荼蘼,荼蘼花开寂寞洲。山水有梦眷来人,往来皆是乌衣头。紫蟒腾蛇都乘雾,何心有向山水幽。春送瑞香紫玉灰,芍药月下窗前种。冬添红梅迎枝绽,素心雪莲倾囊送。芙蓉茱萸挂不休,春秋冬夏顺水走。山水有心性不转,人来往往又匆匆。世人皆知山水好,哪能无心情便休。寄情山水古今事,楼台亭阁一梦中。乎乎高山汤汤水,哪个不识花月浓。我送千秋一好梦,千秋万岁乐无忧。蓬莱洲上寻仙草,根根茎叶入吾胸。从此山水难相逢,青山依旧水长东。

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背景什么的,应该很明显吧。用典也是很常用的典故呀。当初想到写这个不过是突然想到了汉乐府的《有所思》。看到女主人公说,“从今以往,勿复相思,相思与君绝。”又想到卓文君曾说“闻君有两意,故来相决绝。”自古多情总被无情伤,敢爱敢恨的女子不少,可是真要做到与君相决绝又何其艰难。所以才有山水有心情难休。纵然,你若无情请我便休,但是只要想到此情应是长相守,不禁伤从心起,所以才写了这个。借山水之口,来诉心肠罢了
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目测不是打油诗,可以解释一下创作背景吗?
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寫得十分棒!! 我喜歡這幾句: 花柳门前待来翁。我欲相随到荼蘼,荼蘼花开寂寞洲。芍药月下窗前种。芙蓉茱萸挂不休,春秋冬夏顺水走。山水有心性不转,哪能无心情便休。
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嗯,昨天晚上无聊写的,写的不好,不要笑我~喵呜

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